You are infuriating, he said
(I try, I said)
You drive me wild
(I am wild)
You forget to call
(my heart was calling, and
I hoped, you had
heard it)
You are loud in public
(I wanted you to see me)
You keep to yourself
(it is safer that way)
I adore you
(I feel adored)
I want you
(I wanted you first)
Let’s get away, you said
(I am afraid to fly)
Let’s remember what we
wanted when we started
(I adore you)
I need a break, you say
(you broke me)
I love this poem. It’s very clever without in any way being pretentious. Perfectly simple, but, like a picture, it speaks a thousand words.
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I really appreciate that, thank you
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This is so powerful!
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Thank you Jodi ^_^
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That is a sparkling invention. It amuses, surprises and speaks volumes of the relationship.
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Thank you, we’ve been married 29 years
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Great post :)
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Thanks!
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